Woman's work
Woman's work is a very important issue in our society. woman plays a different roles in the society.
Woman has an important duty in the life which is take care of her kids and she must brought them up ,but there are other duties she work to helps her husband in the life to face their financial problems together.
the role of woman in our society has changed womens and girls have more opportunities to achieve there goals,but they also faced alot of challenges which try to close their way,but they try.
Some men are against woman's work,because they thought that woman's role just to take care of kids and house needs.
In my opinion i think women and men are equal as god made them so woman should works and gets her rights in the society,and man should accept the issue of woman's work and help her.
So woman's work is very important and man should accept this truth and adapt with it.
Woman has an important duty in the life which is take care of her kids and she must brought them up ,but there are other duties she work to helps her husband in the life to face their financial problems together.
the role of woman in our society has changed womens and girls have more opportunities to achieve there goals,but they also faced alot of challenges which try to close their way,but they try.
Some men are against woman's work,because they thought that woman's role just to take care of kids and house needs.
In my opinion i think women and men are equal as god made them so woman should works and gets her rights in the society,and man should accept the issue of woman's work and help her.
So woman's work is very important and man should accept this truth and adapt with it.
A good draft but you need to do the following
ردحذف1. woman plays a different roles (different roles).
2. duty in (the) life which is (to) take care of her kids
3. Woman has an important duty in the life which is take care of her kids and she must brought them up ,but there are other duties she work to helps her husband in the life to face their financial problems together( too long sentence, divide it into different sentences.)
4. You need to modify your sentences they are so long and you need to divide them. Also the paragraphs consists of one long sentence, it is impossible.